[This is Part-two of a two-part series. For Part-one,
click here.]
A tough decision
(August 2011)
The agent had asked me if any other agents had read my proposal.
Ahhahahah! I loved that question. I read it over and over
again, smiling and laughing to myself. This email was written by someone who WANTS
ME. This was the first time in a long time when someone in a position of power
recognized that the book had potential.
Was I surprised? Of course. But just a little. Deep down, I
knew the book was good. Well, maybe it wasn’t good quite yet, but I knew that it would be good.
But to answer her question, yes, anther agency did have the
proposal in their hands.
My friend JanaLee hooked me up with a small, two-person, mom
and pop agency. (Let’s call them mom and pop.) While mom and pop had represented a few impressive clients—a Nobel Prize winner for instance—they were
a small website-less, two-person agency. When I talked to them on the phone, they
were laid back and casual. Picking up a new writer to them seemed as ordinary
as picking up the morning paper. But now that I had options, I didn’t want to
be “picked up.”
I wanted to be seduced.
The seductive agency (let’s call them Agency A) was
passionate, sending me emails and setting up multiple phone conferences. (This
is the agency that sent me a couple emails including the “Does any other agent
have this” line.) And while they called themselves “small,” they had a host of
clients, several of whom won awards and were New York Times Bestsellers.
One of the co-owners of Agency A insinuated that my book
could be “big.” He threw around writers names like mega-bestseller Tim Ferriss,
hinting that my book could achieve similar success. He was a bit pushy, though,
telling me that I was merely “molting” as a writer, and that I needed to
rewrite the book with a completely different structure. He wanted it to be a “how-to,”
with tables and charts and such. I didn’t know anything about writing a
“how-to,” and while I had nothing against how-to’s, I just didn’t think that
was my style.
They were passionate. They were big. And they were promising
big things if I did it their way…
Mom and pop, on the other hand, didn’t seem to care how I
wrote it. Plus, they offered free book editing, which is a service basically unheard of among literary agencies. Plus, they were just really nice; I knew that they weren't the type who’d let me agonize over an unanswered email for months
on end.
With much reluctance, hesitation, and second-guessing, I
turned down Agency A.
I wanted to write the book my way. I went with mom and pop.
Proposal submission (November
2011)
After I selected an agency, I edited the manuscript and
revised the proposal. I fixed up the sample chapter, created a “comparable
books” section, described my core audience, and touched up my overview. The
document, now, was well over 100 pages. I thought it was looking pretty good.
We had to wait till November to submit it because there are
only a few times over the course of a year when a publishing company is able to
approve new projects.
Once we put some last touches on the proposal, my agent
submitted it to editors at 17 big-time publishing companies, the names of which
most any casual reader would be able to recognize.
How was I feeling when my agent submitted the proposals? I
was excited. Optimistic, even. We couldn’t have picked a better time. Because
of the ongoing Occupy Wall Street demonstrations, student debt was suddenly at
the forefront of the national consciousness. My book dealt with a lot of issues
facing the indebted demographic. And while there were books about debt—I
couldn’t find one narrative about someone actually getting out of debt. It was timely.
It was relevant. It was inspirational! Millions will want to read it!
But I’d been rejected from school and internships and girls enough
to know not to go my hopes up. After all, there was the possibility of getting
rejected across the board. I didn’t have a backup plan, so if the book was
rejected, I figured I’d just call it quits and buy a ticket to Europe or Asia
or South America or some continent I’d never visited.
First responses
The following responses came from editors at various publishing
companies. I’m keeping their names and the company’s names anonymous out of courtesy:
1) Although this story
does sound interesting I'm afraid the amount of publicity he did after the
Salon article scares me off. I think it would be a real impediment to getting
(repeat) publicity for the book. Of course, this is just one editor's opinion;
maybe another will be less skittish and more bullish about this.
Okay, I thought, no biggie. She didn’t say anything about
the writing being crappy or anything. In fact, she said it was "interesting." She just figured there was a publicity
technicality.
2) Interesting story, but as luck would have
it, I just passed on a student debt book the other day. Our sense is that these
kinds of books are difficult to sell because there’s so much advice on reducing
student debt on the internet for free. And even though Ken has a decidedly
different slant on this, I just have a sense it would be difficult to get out
big numbers.
Okay, no big deal. He thought it was interesting, too. 0 for 2, but not a bad 0 for 2.
3) Ken is a delightful
writer, and an inspiration to anybody who has ever despaired at their own
personal student debt, but I’m afraid this project isn’t quite right for us.
This is more of a personal memoir than it is an examination of the debt crisis,
and I don’t think we’d be well-positioned to publish this effectively. Thanks
very much for the chance to read!
“Delightful writer.” Now that’s what I’m talking about. It
seemed like he liked the idea, but his company didn’t appear to be into memoirs.
I shouldn’t take this one personally.
4) He has a terrific
voice indeed and is quite a lively writer. I enjoyed these pages very
much and it couldn’t have a more timely resonance. I regret, however,
that I just couldn’t see a way for us to break this out at a larger
level. Thank you again for thinking of me; I know you’ll find a great
home for this.
“Terrific voice?” “Delightful writer?” What’s the problem,
here??
5) Ken Ilgunas is a
very winning guy and has a story that certainly tracks the political/economic
moment. However, I didn’t find the writing terribly strong.
Oh, Jesus, this is going to be painful.
6) It rests somewhere between a full bodied
memoir and a truly practical guide for students and graduates, not quite either
one. I liked Ken on the page, but I found him a little too earnest and lacking
in fresh insight at book length.
Earnest? I'm not sure I'd say I’m earnest, but what’s wrong with
being earnest? Must all writers be sarcastic and cool and hip and ironic?
7) I wish the writing were stronger—it’s
perfectly fine, but because the premise is so quirky, I think the writing might
need to be a notch more distinctive. (I did stop reading it somewhere
along the way, feeling I got the gist….) Let me take another look and
consult with my colleague, who was interested in the subject from a generational
perspective. I’m glad you checked in, since I read it right after you
sent it and am now a bit foggy about it.
Oh god, not another “strong writing” comment.
8) Unfortunately we don’t think it’s quite
right for us, in part because the writing isn’t as strong as I would have liked
it to be, but also because as all of the younger readers commented to me,
they’ve got much more debt than the range that he’s writing about and his
solutions wouldn’t really come close to helping them to pay it off. So they
felt his story was largely irrelevant for them. I’ve got to listen to
that, as they’re right in the core potential readership.
Conference Call
And suddenly, I became numb. As the rejections continued to trebuchet
into my inbox, I’d become a diligent mason, erecting mile-high stone walls
around my brittle, defenseless psyche.
This was it. This was my writing “career.” I’d been writing
on a semi-professional basis since 2004. In eight years, I’d gotten paid
something like $2,000 for all my work. How much longer am I going to write for
pocket change? It’s not like I had another book idea in the back of my mind. If
I can’t sell a book about student debt when EVERYONE is in debt, then what can
I sell? If I can’t sell a story about a dude secretly living in his goddamned
van, then, well, I simply don’t have what it takes.
Frankly I thought I was sitting on a pot of gold when
everyone else just thought I was taking a dump. What must I do to show these
New York City-ites that this was going to be a good book?
I was numb. I could neither feel gloom nor hope—just a
steady nothing mixed in with a dash of dread. So when one publishing company showed interest,
my reaction could best be described as “meh.”
My agents and I had a conference call with that company’s
editor. He seemed really enthusiastic. He said he once built a canoe. He said
he had wondered why we all go into debt. He got it. Finally, someone fucking
got it! But I was still so numb and detached—I would not let my hopes get up
again.
Amid the rejections, there were a couple more publishing
companies that showed interest. Okay, I might have a chance, I thought.
After the proposal had been in publishers’ hands for a few
weeks, my agent told all others who hadn’t responded that they had to make
their decision soon. He set a specific day.
Game day (December
2011)
I think we are most content in our working lives when we play a useful role, especially when this role is
in accord with our passions, and when it provides us with an arena where we can
exercise our unique abilities. We feel best about our work when we do something
that other people cannot.
Maybe I was merely “molting,” but I wanted writing to be my
role. I was happy writing for myself or for a small (but wonderful) blog
audience, but when I’d write for a larger audience, I’d often fall into a
“writing nirvana.” I’d forget about everything else. Me and this Microsoft Word
document would become one. I’d be so wholeheartedly engaged in the project that
I wouldn’t want to check my email or eat or go to bathroom. I just wanted to
write; and knowing that these words might make someone laugh or think made the
work feel meaningful.
The happiest year of my life was probably when I was the "arts editor" for my undergraduate school’s newspaper, The
Spectrum. I loved writing columns, dreaming up stories for the staff to
write, thinking about the layout… It printed three days a week. And at night,
before a workday, I couldn’t wait for
the morning to come. I'd never felt that way before and I don't think I've ever felt that way since. That’s how much I loved that newspaper and my job. Since
then, I’ve known that writing was what I wanted to do for the rest of my life.
I wanted to feel that same sense of anticipation for the morning every night.
So on the day that I was to find out if I got a book deal, I
was numb, but I wasn’t so numb that I’d forgotten what was at stake. I just
felt powerless. I’d done all that I could do. My fate was in someone else’s
hands.
The phone call
My phone rang.
“Hello Ken,” said my literary agent.
“Hi P----.”
“Well, I have news.”
“Okay.”
[There were several companies who were interested in
bidding, but I must refrain from divulging specific information.]
“[Unnamed publishing company] has made a bid. What do you
think of $-0,000?”
While 15 percent of it
would go to the agents, I knew my impoverished days were over for a long time.
While I’d like to say I accepted the news nonchalantly—like
a good gentlemen—my response was far from classy.
“ARE YOU SHITTIN’ ME??!!
Oh my god. Holy fuck. Holy fuck!”
Some moments when by.
“Are you serious?” I asked.
“Yes,” my agent said, laughing. “They want to publish your
book. Would you like to accept?”
“Ha. Yes, of course.”
Epilogue
Within a couple days, I had flown to NYC for the afternoon
to have a lunch with my agents and my new editor. The following weekend, to
celebrate, my pals and I got drunk in my friend Quaz’s basement playing beer
pong and flip cup.
I needed to recommence editing, so I moved back down to
Acorn Abbey in Stokes County, North Carolina, where I’ve gone over the book 3-4
more times. The van is still here. I had the oil changed and it runs as well as
ever.
Currently, the book has 22 chapters and 90,000 words. I’ll
be sending it to my editor soon and it should be “done done” within the next few
months. It will be available in hardcover and ebook next year, ideally in
January of 2013.
I cannot name the publisher quite yet since the contract has
yet to be signed, but I’m excited to work with them. It’s a big-name, and one
y’all will be able to recognize. I’ll announce it as soon as I can.
While I’ve been avoiding full-time jobs these past many
years, I've done so with the hope of setting myself up with a job I really cared about—a job where
I’d be happy to work 12 hour days. And now that I have that, I don’t know if I’ve
ever been happier than I have been these past two months. Every night, I look
forward to the morning.
But with the pleasures of having a book deal come the
stirrings of anxiety—a good anxiety—but one that will grow and grow and grow as
I begin to worry more and more: What if people don’t like it?
